3. I found it much, much easier this time to say what I wanted to say. The past two times, I felt myself looking at the clock trying to get to the 90-second mark. However, this time I found myself running out of time, and had to cut it short! I really think I've made a significant improvement from my first Elevator Pitch.
Wednesday, November 7, 2018
Elevator Pitch #3
3. I found it much, much easier this time to say what I wanted to say. The past two times, I felt myself looking at the clock trying to get to the 90-second mark. However, this time I found myself running out of time, and had to cut it short! I really think I've made a significant improvement from my first Elevator Pitch.
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Hi Greg!
ReplyDeleteI agree that you’ve gotten so much better than your last elevator pitch! I’m glad you felt the same way. I think that having a lot to say about your ideas in front of your audience is a great sign, since it indicates your enthusiasm to make your plans work and proves that you have done a lot of thinking in various perspectives about your idea. Great job!
Greg,
ReplyDeleteI could definitely see improvement in your elevator pitches and they flowed much more organically as time went on. Your pitch was much more refined this time around and the lack of pauses really showed how much more comfortable you were speaking about your company. You did a good job of not sounding too rehearsed and showing just the right amount of emotion as well. Congrats on all the improvement!
Hi Greg,
ReplyDeleteAs you said yourself, this elevator pitch is much more refined and overall of a better quality than the previous two pitches. You did a good job detailing the company and providing all the relevant details. Also your enthusiasm for the idea is a major plus, I feel like you would have no problem trying to sell this idea for real if you were given the opportunity.
Greg,
ReplyDeleteYou have made amazing improvements since your original elevator pitch. It is amazing how practice makes perfect! You sound confident in what you are saying, you eliminated the awkward pauses and the wording and tone of voice flows together and sounds natural. You all sound enthusiastic about what your company and ideas which is crucial to keeping the audiences attention. Keep up the great work!